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What do you think of this poem I wrote called Stars?

They dance across the night, Open wide and hearty. Free to scatter the blue, Like a uniformed party.

Stars of every description, Bring peace into this hate. Cradling the universe, Only visible so late.

Lighting up the dark, Chaperoned by the moon. Twinkling like free felt eyes, Crossing the night too soon.

With every sense of love, A touch of lovely scars. Nocturnal creatures shine so bright, Underneath the gorgeous stars.

okay so it might seem like a stupid waste of time poem.. but I actually love it. I wrote it for my boyfriend..because the only thing that we can both see at the same time at night is the stars..and im kinda obssesed with them anyways. okay so lemme know what you think please..

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Answer #1

absolutely wonderfull:)

Answer #2

I think it’s quite beautiful. Good job.

Answer #3

Beautiful!!! lol very good job!!!

Answer #4

great, but how about this:

a romantic night under the stars under Jupiter, Venus, and Mars together we were just me and her and the whole night seemed to be ours

I dont think limericks are supposed to be romantic, but whatever. I guess this kind of fits your scenario.

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