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Warm tingles crawl within, kissing my bones, hugging my flesh. My upgraded heart seems to perform, with a nurturing sensitivity, that somehow comes without fear. It’s like depression without pain, and happiness without limits. Evil has been blocked from my vision, the black sky turns bright blue, but it is only midnight. Flowers, they bloom in the darkness, and the angels surround me with their arms. But it feels so amazing, in such a matter, I might just have to call perfect. Even every breath, is it’s own dream, and every sip of water is more than it seems. Taking drags of a cigarette, and watching the smoke drift away, drift away, drift away, drift away…

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Answer #1

it’s beautiful..♥

Answer #2

wowww

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