a poem that I wrote, what do you think?

Uhh I wrote a poem a while back and I just now found it again (random huh? I know lol) and I was just wondering what you think of it, I have others but this is my main favorite. (theres no name for it)

So many things I’d want to do, But theres no reason for why I’m being held back Going out, meeting people is such an easy idea, But something deep inside just doesnt let me loose.

It doesnt let me loose, yet I dont know what it is. My understanding is the only thing that will set me free.

But I can see, that I cant get free. because I simply have no understanding of whats holding me.

Holding me back. Unwillingly.

Answer #1

haha I like it. your preety good.lol

Answer #2

I read this 5 times. its really great.

Answer #3

It’s pretty good I’ll admit.

Answer #4

lol thanks. sounds good to hear that.

Answer #5

DEEP… =)

Answer #6

I really like it!

Answer #7

ttthhhaaattt wwwaaazzz aaammmaaazzziii nnnggg

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