What do you think of this poem called "Unspoken Affair"?

Lies,Lies,Lies The World around me is nothing but lies. I'd Rather die The to hear another lie My heart crys from all these l...

I hope that one day you will see it my way. Till that day, you see it the unclear way For love is hard to give without taking...

They dance across the night, Open wide and hearty. Free to scatter the blue, Like a uniformed party. Stars of every descript...

Like a ruler so fed up, Full of itself in every wrong way. It eats at the minds of the meek, Watching them slowly decay. ...

This is my poem : sometimes I feel like I'm lonely  a tender desspair posseses me I have my world on my own  Where reigns cla...

I'm falling in this open sea I'm drowning cause you cant save me All I need is one more touch Baby yeah is that too much? I ...

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

When the wind blows beauty fades Thats what happened to you, you should have stayed I miss you bay I need you here To help me...

How come days can feel like years and years can feel like seconds time can pass with silent words calling when love beckons ...

Its not really go and I just randomly wrote it around 3 in the morning its called hold my hand Hold my hand Hold my hand li...