What do you think of this poem written called Questions?

Like a ruler so fed up, Full of itself in every wrong way. It eats at the minds of the meek, Watching them slowly decay.

If death is the fate of everything, What is there left to life. Should nobody be scared of nothing, Or fingers grip so tight a knife.

What makes the stars dance, Tears drop for what reason. Weak and forceful feet, Tred slowly through the seasons.

If pain nibbles at our souls, And screams dance in our lungs. Why is death so gruesome and feared, While the crying song is sung.

Answer #1

I think it’s very good and it was probably thought thru a while but I really like it! Good job :D

Answer #2

VVVery good !!! and the title questions suits it. it asks questions, which are real, needs reasons yet has resasons ,. REAL GOOD

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