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A poem I wrote called believe what do you think?

I’m falling in this open sea I’m drowning cause you cant save me All I need is one more touch Baby yeah is that too much?

I dont know what to believe Theres no more turning back now Ill wait forever for you If you tell me you love me now Oh this journey that I’m on It keeps slowing down If you tell me the truth baby ill see the signs around

Holding me, loveing you is all that I wanted to do You made my world so bright But you brought me on this winding road Yeah you take my love and put it away save it for another day Oh but I hope you find it soon

I dont know what to believe Theres no more turning back now Ill wait forever for you If you tell me you love me now On this journey that I’m on It keeps slowing down If you tell me the truth baby ill see the signs around

Yes you made a mistake You let me go now I break On this journey going fast my love for you has to last Baby your all I need in my heart and in my dreams So turn around now cause I’m here waiting Baby save me I’m fading Oh help me now I’m fading…

I dont know what to believe I’m just waiting for you to be with me

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Answer #1

thank you (:

Answer #2

I like it. It sounds good.

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