Some poems I wrote tell me what you think.

Time days go by in hours and minutes memories pass in heartbreak and fear the minutes have passed only seconds remain but the blood is so thick I cant see the blade

 Past

no matter what it doesnt go away the haunting past so much pain to remember it hurt to hide in fear for now I sit in a puddle of tears

Answer #1

yep

Answer #2

they make me feel sad.

but a poem that can move someone has to be good right?

Answer #3

not always.. and at some parts it is sad and are able to change but then besides tht, i think its good because it shows how life really is and really from experiance and facts about life its not always about happiness!

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