what do you think of my poem im never gonna be prefect I wrote today?

Im breaking, im crushed. Theres no truth. did they even care when they said they’d always be there?

im not sure who to trust who will always be there? because im being lied to over and over.

Im lost and cant be found some way some how I have to make it through Im never gonna be perfect enough

im so worried you’ll leave me alone just like everyone else what can I do, what can I say to keep me from feeling this way?

I worrie way to much but I have learned I have to stay grard I have to stand my ground.

I have been hurt so many times I barley show my true emotions its all bottled up inside it’s killing me inside

you are my only flame even if there is rain this feeling I have is so unreal that why its so hard to believe

help me through, help me out as I said… im never gonna be prefect enough

Answer #1

thats really good!! :) it has a really deep meaning to it and I love poems like that :) well done!!

Answer #2

melancholial. which is good, if thats what you were aiming for.

Answer #3

It’s alright, but it’s… kind of emo.

Answer #4

That’s a great poem!!! :) it’s awesome!!!

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