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What do you think?? (song)

Yea… I just finished writing this song. What do you think?

There for You

[Verse] I don’t know why I felt the need To save you from your dreams But there was something about you There was something about your screams

You always wake up crying Out of breath from screaming You tell me you dream you’re dying And then you tell me that you need me

[Chorus] You want me to hold you During the night while you sleep You need me there for you To fight away your all dreams (x2)

[Verse] I don’t want you to feel this pain So, I try and make it go away But I can’t fight it every time There’s just some pain that always stays

I know what it feels like To have no one around And I know what it feels like When every things profound

[Chorus] You want me to hold you During the night while you sleep You need me there for you To fight away all your dreams (x2)

[Verse] So, I want you to know I’m always here for you I will never leave your side Unless you want me to

I care for you way to much To see you feel this pain So, I want you to know I am here to stay

[Chorus] You want me to hold you During the night while you sleep You need me there for you To fight away all your dreams (x2)

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Answer #1

Truly. No one usually listens to the song because of the lyrics it all depends on the beat. But over all I think its o.k. Good luck!

Answer #2

I like it, maybe a little tuning up here and there and itll be awesome

Answer #3

yah I would listen to it.

Answer #4

encore encore!

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