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What do you think of my song?

I wrote it for my boyfriend, it songs better sung with the melody :)

It’s called Always =)

I pointed to a star in the sky You looked at me and wondered why But the smile upon my face Should have shown the answer The whispers that tickled in my ear Baby I’ll always wish you were here Because today was the day, Oh, today was the day I knew, You’d always stay

‘Cause if I were to Break down, baby, break down You’d be, right there Like I, Always knew you would And if I were to Fall down, baby, fall down Would you, Catch me, like I Already knew you would

The eyes that looked right into mine The corner stone of all my time And by the end of the night I never want to leave The inside jokes that stay in our hearts Now I know Nothing can tear us a part Because tonight was the night Oh, tonight was the night I knew You’d stay mine

Chorus

Would you, catch me Would you, catch me Like I, always knew always knew you would

Chorus x2

already knew you would

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Answer #1

That is brilliant! omfg WELL GOOD!

Answer #2

You guys are very nice (:

Answer #3

I luv it very much =)

Answer #4

I like it =)

Answer #5

Thank you! :)

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