Song I wrote. Do you think its good?

Ok here is a song I wrote. and I just wanna know what you think!

I know it seems kind of silly to let you go but right I don’t seem care anymore, we were fighting all the time anyway, so all I gotta say, is that im waiting for my prince charming, cause I know he wont be a liar like you were, and I know he wont be a cheater like you were, and I know, oh I know, he wont break my heart in two like you did, so all I gotta say is, im waiting for my prince charming. You stopped by my place last night, to tell me you missed me and you don’t wanna fight, I told you before and ill tell you again is that im waiting for my prince charming, cause I know he wont be a liar like you were, and I know he wont be a cheater like you were, and I know, oh I know, he wont break my heart in two like you did, so all I gotta say is im waiting for my prince charming. You told me you loved me, it just wasn’t meant to be, you said can we be friends, and I said hell no go find some other girl to cheat with and lie to cause im waiting for my prince charming and I know he wont be a liar like you were, and I know he wont be a cheater like you were, and I know, oh I know, he wont break my heart in two like you did, so all I gotta say is that im waiting for my prince charming. Yeah all I gotta say is that im waiting for my prince charming.

Answer #1

oh wow, well the songs really good :) yes keep practicing and writing these songs and I wish you all the luck in your future, x

Answer #2

I do both! im planning on becoming a singer. but I want to write all my own songs and not have someone else write them. but I sing and practice a lot! practice makes perfect!

Answer #3

that’s really good :), do you just like writing the songs or do you sing as well? :)

Answer #4

I like it so much , :) gd luck

Answer #5

that is really great, how did you think of that :)

Answer #6

thanks! :)

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