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Tell me what you think of my third song

Song Title: The Unexperienced

Youre supposed to push harder and harder Your guessing, lost What happens when there is no guide No direction This turns out to be that inward Its like a pillow being soft Too bad the feeling is soon to be lost Results without the cost Commitment is your only flaw Disobeying the building law Naked is your way of being clothed But afraid is the rope behind you Be the gold Gold comes from your mind Be the gold Make that specific find When you go to ask the help Express to them what you felt The hardship of what you couldnt do How every time it hurts to chew Go back home with a confident step And never look back Your war is not finished yet

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aha its so meaningfulll and it makes sense and parts of it rhymesss(: I love itt!(:

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