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What do you think about this poem called Unknown.?
Endless opportunities, In a gut wrenching place. Too much to be done, Within such a lonley space.
Skies of black, Surround a world so cold. Wide open spaces, Not enough happiness to hold.
Lessons that flow off the page each day, Invisible tears make new scars. Running around with no meaning, Its as pointless as chasing ustoppable cars.
With glorifying cries of pain, And hugs as sharp as glass. Such a lonely world ou thtere, The population its growing class.
Expressions and cold words, Shot out of angry lips. Empty scars that trace up arms, Leaving memories left with blood to sip.
It’s really good. I like your use of metafors. I feal that your trieing to say something about society and it’s a prominent message though it’s still taktfully put. it’s grate, keap it up. xx
nice . real nice
wow you really wrote that?!?! I loved it I thought it was an awesome poem.you are really great.loloz XD
I think that is very good!! Did you write that yourself?
its rearlly good , its rearlly creative ! xxx
It is awsome!!!
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