What do you think of my new poem?

I promised I would always love you , you promised you would always love me I promised I would never let go , you promised you...

can you understand the meaning? I hate poem I dont understand and I wouldnt want mine to be that way. --- Take me away fro...

Like a blade, your brilliance pierces through my heart, As you say, that you don't love me. Like a blade your anger pierces t...

I stumble through the darkness I just cant find the light. Ihear myself screaming, It echoes through the night. I feel my fin...

yet again another poem. and yah, I wrote this one in like 5minutes, so it's not the best thing ever. he says my name I melt ...

Heart break sucks, No way to recover, This happens with the worst of luck. Heart break is evil, Eating you up, Very brittle....

I look at him He looks at me We stare at eachother for an eternity I want to know what to say But I just sit there Falling aw...

the other side I thought you loved me I thought I knew you'd never hit me thats the other side of you behind the anger the...

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

Hey, I'm back again this time its a poem for school and I'm not exactly sure whether, even if it does make sense, if I used t...