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What should I call my poem and what do you think about it??
This is my poem : sometimes I feel like I’m lonely a tender desspair posseses me I have my world on my own Where reigns clarity
Cz Hope no more I own Scattered and shattered it lays For my heart is ripped and thrown And my life seems like a maze
Well did you now that’s how I felt? Did you know it begun when you left? you drew nothing in my head Just sweet bitter thouts mislead
And every time I look at the sea At the sun down at the trees I know that this world is a quality But what’s wrong it’s me
Now I feel so alone I think I’m gonna mourn Yh I’ll mourn my loss And then I’ll burry myself under your thourns
Just once I bagg Pretend to love me Ure good at lies u’ll fool me I’ve figured it out already Lay on my lifeless side
Can I die with a smile? Pleas say you love me
Mesery prowls around Feeling a sudden pain Thinking I’m not sane I fall to the ground
crimson blood covers my buddy I see liitle peaces of glass 3inches deep in my flesh
And then I gasp Realizing that these are the broken peaces of of my heart
love it but use a thesaurus and try and change common words in a poem you dont have to spell everything out either make it as creative as you can
and as for what to call it … what is the first word you think of when you read it ?
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