This poem...so new it's warm! Thoughts?

Sweet daddy i’m coming home To that place, the dark lost space I’m sinking back into your arms Swimming in the empty thoughts Daddy I have come back Just like I always do Sweet daddy, you’re glad to see me I can feel it in your gaze My eyes have lost that shine Just like you always wanted And a smile is just a reflex now I’ve learned all the words by heart Yes here I am again Take me in, let me be yours again I have tried to run away But I always come back, you know In that dark corner, you’ll always find me Drifting through my blank thoughts Crouched up on my bed lying Shutting out the world i’m flying Flying high, i’m flying away Come on fly with me…

Answer #1

:D Love it, actually!

Answer #2

its great!!! congrats by daddy do you mean literally daddy or like boyfriens or husband?

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