A start to a new poem...

The sun sets, Casting distorted beats, Of red and orange, ???

The nite shines through, Embracing the subtle hints of darkness, ??? ???

the question marks are for new lines that I havent figured out yet… if any of you think of anything that may sound good in there then please tell me!

Answer #1

Thought I’d take a crack at it…

The sun sets, Casting distorted beats, Of red and orange, Quitely it lays to its slumber, Setting in the close of day.

The nite shines through, Embracing the subtle hints of darkness, Creating mood for all who stir in her realm, Long and deep the darkness is.

I like your style…good luck

Chilldue

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