What you think of my new poem?

I hope that one day you will see it my way. Till that day, you see it the unclear way For love is hard to give without taking...

can you understand the meaning? I hate poem I dont understand and I wouldnt want mine to be that way. --- Take me away fro...

Like a blade, your brilliance pierces through my heart, As you say, that you don't love me. Like a blade your anger pierces t...

I stumble through the darkness I just cant find the light. Ihear myself screaming, It echoes through the night. I feel my fin...

yet again another poem. and yah, I wrote this one in like 5minutes, so it's not the best thing ever. he says my name I melt ...

Heart break sucks, No way to recover, This happens with the worst of luck. Heart break is evil, Eating you up, Very brittle....

I look at him He looks at me We stare at eachother for an eternity I want to know what to say But I just sit there Falling aw...

the other side I thought you loved me I thought I knew you'd never hit me thats the other side of you behind the anger the...

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

Hey, I'm back again this time its a poem for school and I'm not exactly sure whether, even if it does make sense, if I used t...