Do you like my new poem?

I just wrote so give me some pointers!

Rain Drips into the gutters onto the streets Rain is everywhere Falling it drips down the windowpane and flows into the lane flowing through the streets flooding my mind part of nature part of me

TA-DA!!! What do you think?

Answer #1

loveee it

Answer #2

Eh, then in that case, nevermind. Good job.

Answer #3

Not amazing. But definately good. You should make it rhyme more.

=]

Answer #4

Its not supposed to rhyme I’m not a rhyming person

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