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Who thinks this song I wrote is good?

(Look just to let you know, im a beginner. So NO bad words, Or bad comments. If you dont like it or if you think it sucks, DO NOT say that it does. I work hard on these and to have you tell me its bad hurts so comment ONLY if you have advice or if you like it because the site is about giving advice so give me some if you want but dont say stop writing because thats what I love to do and im not stoping anytime soon. So thanks.)

Its called how I feel.

I’ve been looking forward to tonight. When nobodys around the feelings right. But I gotta wait until your friends are gone then that means we’ll text for so long ill forget the time and its hard to explain but I feel perfectly fine.

because we have those long converstaions with the lols and the things you do that make me yell, yell for more. Ill misread all the things you send me and when I finally know my heart will melt and fall, fall to the floor. I know its real but its just not a good time to tell you how I feel.

( Thats what I got so far so please tell me what you think:). If none of you know what its about ill tell you. Its about texting someone thats really sweet and you know your inlove but you cant tell him how you really feel because you might loose EVERYTHING. And yes I wrote it so DONT steal. Tell me what you think. NO harsh comments. Thanks)

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Answer #1

Hey hun.

I think its really good. Dont listen to sippypee. but the beat and sound is what really matter.did you figure that out yet?

Byebye xoxo

Answer #2

well can you rate it ? lol like how many stars do you give it

Answer #3

thanxx you guys lol @799forever yea I do thanxx for answering it :) all of you that was really sweet.

Answer #4

ummm… it really doesnt matter what we think… what matters is if you like it

Answer #5

love love ittt and I like the way it rhymes…well done :D

Answer #6

thats good :) and at least your trying^^^ those people there dont know what good is:) x

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