I wrote this about a year or two ago, but i'd still like to know what you think?

Who am I to you? Could I be the one, That fills your heart with affection? Or is it already filled with sorrow and pain?

Do i mean anything to you? Would it be possible That i could feel safe And secure here?

What am I to you? Lover, Allie, best friend? Or am i the enemy In this never ending battle?

But i know that If i could be sure of anything Anything at all It’s that you mean something special to me,

Answer #1

I love everything about it, except the end. The last line seems off. I don’t know why, it just does. Otherwise? Amazing :)

Answer #2

thanks :)

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