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I wrote this about a year or two ago, but i'd still like to know what you think?
Who am I to you? Could I be the one, That fills your heart with affection? Or is it already filled with sorrow and pain?
Do i mean anything to you? Would it be possible That i could feel safe And secure here?
What am I to you? Lover, Allie, best friend? Or am i the enemy In this never ending battle?
But i know that If i could be sure of anything Anything at all It’s that you mean something special to me,
I love everything about it, except the end. The last line seems off. I don’t know why, it just does. Otherwise? Amazing :)
thanks :)
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