Do you like my Poem?

it’s very long, sorry in advance but any feedback would be great thx :-)

In every way I want you, you know how true that is, Your love means so much to me, I truly miss you, How much longer do I have to pay for that one Mistake, How much torture can I take? If I said I’m sorry, would you love me like before? Can you find it in your heart to love me anymore? I never meant to hurt you & it would it be a crime, To take me back if I said I’m sorry, one more time, A year ago you told me, that you & I are through, & that soon I would forget you, yet you tore my heart in two, One year ago I lost you yet I’m still missing you, I still cry, please tell me why? Only if you could understand, you think its only puppy love, This emotion that I feel, love could never be this real, I walk in circles in a daze, while you wait for me to grow out of this phase, If it’s a phase I’m going through, it wont end till your mine, I know your feelings have not died, I guess that’s why I’m putting up with what I’m going through, But you too one night will wish that you could turn back time, You burnt the very depths of me, But kept your thoughts inside, The moments we loved and shared together, Will live forever inside of me, I’ve been praying you would come back to me, I’ve prayed with all my heart, I’ve had so many sleepless nights since we’ve been apart, I cant remember smiling since heaven knows how long, & everything I try to do, always turns out wrong, Too many nights I’ve been alone thinking where you’d be, & wishing all so very much, that you were holding me, I don’t know how your feeling now, Or if you’re hurting too, Or if you’re missing me as much as I miss you, Maybe you don’t think of me, even now or then, You have not tried to call me once, since I don’t know when, I truly wish you would change your mind & come back to me once again, Please give it some thought!

Answer #1

this poem is years before I met my husband lol & since you asked nicely, you can copy & paste it. just dont go selling it lmao!!

Answer #2

A really nice one…too gud…I think you r really heart- broken, hope he comes back, best of luck and hey, can I copy this poem, please

Answer #3

its really good!!! I LOVE IT ;)

Answer #4

very g d

Answer #5

I was just kidding lol! go 4 it :-)

Answer #6

Okey…ya I am not going to sell it…believe me :P

thnx

Answer #7

it is very good ..

Answer #8

this is really good I luv it and im not a poetry person.

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