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• what if I was to say I miss you every day What if you loved me to? What would I do? So now you have to listen About someone I was missing Oh how I she stopped my heart beat My emotions retreat Her everlasting beauty controlled me How it was only her I could see All the dreams I’ve had I was never sad Never a night mare The way she only could care How I want to hold her The way my emotions flur How only she can see my scars How we looked at the stars I only want to see her every day Every word that I say Her skin so touchable My life she could control Her voice echoes in my head My feelings left said Left for her to ignore My heart was tore She said it wasn’t true Only if she knew What id do I do what I have to To get her love But my emotions dieing like a dove She committed a crime And stopped time So now my heart was gone Wondering what I do rong That girl I know it’s true Every dream I have the girl is you

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Answer #1

thats is so cool loves it

Answer #2

thanks I never rely like my poams thay make me mad cause there never good enoth

Answer #3

I don’t think your poem is good. I think its absolutely AMAZING!!! That is one of the best poems I’ve ever read. (:

Answer #4

I give it 2 thumbs up! =]

Answer #5

wooh, I love this so much! each line is precise and sharp, but yet has emotions filling them into more than just a line. it’s a story really, and you drew me in with the first few lines. I love it (: really really nice job, keep it up lol

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