Do think this is a good poem?

Do you think this is a good poem:

A boy and a girl Growing up in this world They chanced to meet One of those coincidences

They happened to talk A boy and a girl They liked what they heard They spoke in seriousness and jest

About topics that would shape the world And those that shaped their lives A boy and a girl Something happening

They were there for eachother They cared for each other They were in love with each other A boy and a girl

Answer #1

aww thats really sweet. and yea, its an excellent poem!

I love how you moved the line down in each stanza. very unique =)

Answer #2

Yes, it’s so endearing.

Answer #3

the idea is really sweet, but try 2 work on the wording a little, like lostwife said

Answer #4

like I said on your profile wow.

Answer #5

Hey masterzxo95. Remember me???

It’s very sweet. I would word it a little differently but it’s from your heart. That’s all that counts. She won’t care if it was good or not. You’ll get credit for thinking about it.

Take care.

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