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The only thing that’s going through my head as we walk alone down the dark roads is how much I love you and wanna be with you. But still the guilt is to much for me to bear so I tell you to chose. You say you don’t know you tell me I have a slim chance but that you still love me and want to be with me too. I don’t know what to believe anymore. So until you choose I’ve decided to cut off all emotion until the final burst of pain knocks me into the deepest depths of my mind

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OMG!!! I love it… it could use some work but your clearly showing your emotions. the thing is that I feel like I wrote it, im a guy and almost cried when I read it because I could put every word of that into my own situation. its great!

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