Do you think I should give this poem to my boyfriend, is it good?

Do you think I should give this to my boyfriend? Is it good?

When ever I am with you… I feel like I can be myself.

When ever I am with you alone… My heart starts beating a million miles a minute.

When ever I am with you… I get these butterflies that never seem to go away.

When ever I am with you in your arms… I never want to leave its the best place in the world no matter where we are.

Whenever I am with you and you look up at me… I just want to kiss you and stay with you forever.

Answer #1

no he will break up with you and never talk to you ever again

Answer #2

if he loves you than he will love it as it shows your heart. having said that, looking at it from a stranger’s perspective it doesn’t jump out at me as an amazing poem. but it’s good to show your heart to your partner. if my girlfriend gave me a poem like that I’d be STOKED! and wanna put it somewhere special, even if the literary community wanted to put it in the bin. Give it to him mate.

Answer #3

well always think twice I have a girlfriend and I have butterflies as well

Answer #4

well I think it is gud!! and I’ll think he’ll like it

Answer #5

I think it’s really sweet. Anything that comes from your heart will mean a lot to him. Sam

Answer #6

if he really likes you he will think its cute add stuff about how you feel though

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