Is this a good poem?

No lying… Do you think that this is a good poem?:

At the peak of blackness in the night You see me for who I truly am

In the burning light of day You kiss me because of who I am

In the time when the sun sets low You call me to tell me how much you love me No lying!!! Do you think that this is a good poem?:

At the breaking of the day You told me something that confused me

In the mid-morning sun I had figured it out And you said good-bye one last time

Answer #1

there great!!!=]]

Answer #2

REALLY GOOD!dang I put 3 poems up on here and they aren’t nearly as good as this!

Answer #3

amazing

Answer #4

thats really a good poem did you made it by yourself???

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