What do you think of this poem good or no?

Before I put the poem down I would like to say. It not weird for a boy to make a poem ( I think :d). And this is the first one I ever thought of so it suck your allow to say so :d

Paranoid like a sixth sense I sing a song of silent fill with emotion I can’t bring the sound into the light The time is not right it will stay in the dark This is the soundtrack of my life

Yeah it a short poem but I might start writing poem :d good way to express feeling and thoughts I see.

So what ya think -.-

Answer #1

I like it a lot! Guys that can write are amazing by the way :) I love writing :) I put up some of my poems and songs as well (:

Answer #2

this is realll good !

Answer #3

I think it should be “paranoia” instead of paranoid…

Answer #4

that do sound kinda better thank :D

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