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Hundreds of miles away, And yet I see your face, Just one big screenplay, Filled with disgrace.

We’ve made many mistakes, It’s too late to change them now, Our lives all fake, The real us we don’t know-how.

You seem to be fading, No more I can see, All of you decayed, This is your fee.

Just one big lie, We both tried to live Yet we try to deny, Ourselves held captive.

We both screwed up, Nothing else to see, But out cards being marked up, With all of the misery.

I can’t live without you, So I decide to go also, I bid my farewells and all my adieu’s, And I say hello to deathblow.

(please read my other poem on here, I like that one better and need feedback on it also)

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Answer #1

I think it is really good. I like the way that you expressed yourself on thepoe. your words are really emotional.

Answer #2

I think You did really well on this poem:) I actually writepoems myself so I think they are wonderful!:) haha well its only easy to write the sad or the ones about love. But job well done.:) cudos to you.

Answer #3

I think its a great poem good job :)

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