what do you think of my poem "My Dreams"?

I dream of someone I dream of you you're like no one youre just you sweet, cute and helpful you raise people when they fall Y...

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

I had to right it for English class, I enjoy writing it now lol. This is deep, something you want to keep, you would even go ...

An unspoken affair and a new beautiful nightmare. Secrets bottled up, Hearts being crushed. Where will this road lead? Does ...

Lies,Lies,Lies The World around me is nothing but lies. I'd Rather die The to hear another lie My heart crys from all these l...

Okay so I write poems and im gonna try to publish them on a site... So I need honest oppinions Just cause her eyes don...

Take me by the hand, And show me a world I'll understand. You can tell the same lie a thousand times, But it never gets anymo...

The way we met you and I, it must of been by fate, for the way we feel for each other, Love could never be this great I never...

I hope that one day you will see it my way. Till that day, you see it the unclear way For love is hard to give without taking...

When she cries See the inner part of what lies inside; When she cries, look into her eyes. The shattered dreams that lived wi...