What do you guys think of these poems?

Okay so I write poems and im gonna try to publish them on a site… So I need honest oppinions

  Just cause her eyes dont tear
 Doesnt mean her heart dont cry
                        &
 Just because she comes off strong
Doesnt mean theres nothing wrong

Im going to smile like nothings wrong, Talk like everythings perfect, Act like its all a dream, And pretend its not hurting me

Well those are all I need to know about…

Answer #1

hmm. I could have sworn I just saw those exact quotes on several icons on photobucket… ??

Answer #2

LOVE IT I WRITE POEMS AND SONGS TO AND THOSE ARE ALMOST AS GOOD AS MINE LOL

Answer #3

lol ya…

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