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When she cries poem, what do you think?

When she cries See the inner part of what lies inside; When she cries, look into her eyes. The shattered dreams that lived within. That part of her that slowly dies.

Watching as life has passed her by, As she cries again deep into the night. With memories of her own life having gone; Alone again, she cries in to the morning light. A life of broken dreams is all that she’s known; Like a cold winter wind that blows relentlessly strong. Even though so many times she has tried; All of it has gone so hopelessly wrong. As the tears continue to fall from her eyes; The hard years of road she has traveled on. Another large piece of her continues to die; All the love she once knew has all but gone. She doesn’t think it’s worth trying; Not knowing just where she belongs. As the tears continue to fall from her eyes; Grasping desperately, trying to hold strong. Her faith is no longer here to be found; Again she cried deep into the night. Through her cries of pain she slowly died; Never to wake again by the morning light. ~angelfury~

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