What do you think about my poem I made up?

when you say I love u, you make me cry for that I know it's not true it's all a lie don't say it! don't say it! you brok...

this is a poem I made up tell me what you think positive OR negative comments are accepted ...

Ok I no this isnt very good because I s*ck at writing but what do you think... The girl no one really knows... No one k...

My hands are shaking My lips are dry I bite my tongue Trying hard not to cry Ilook onto the battlefield Were warm blood has ...

I made up a poem, tell me what you think: Willow tree, willow tree why are you so sad? She is no longer sitting on your bran...

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

I had to right it for English class, I enjoy writing it now lol. This is deep, something you want to keep, you would even go ...

okay, so I just now wrote this in like two minutes, so it's not that good, but just wondering, what do you think of it? like...

I'm not really sure if this one makes sense...it does to me. lol. The Needer You seem to think I've gone too far, But who ...

(I wrote this in 15 minutes because I was bored in a class not the greatest thing ever I know, what do you think its about?) ...