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Feelings
The sadness in my eyes. The hurting in my heart. The fake smile on my face Keeping me from falling apart.
The feelings I get when im with you. The feelings I get when im not. The feelings I have for you Are all I got.
The way you take my breath away. The way you make me smile. The way you make me feel My life is worth while.
Omg I love it, I wish I could write poems like that, I did have a phase writin poems but they didnt sound right, but yehh that is a brilliant poem, well done x :)
Sounds great :)
The only thing that I would change is "all I got" to "all I have."
I thnk it was pretty good. I like to write poems too.
I love it!!! great!!!
I love it!
