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I need 2 know what you think... it's a love poem I made up...

when you say I love u, you make me cry for that I know it’s not true it’s all a lie don’t say it! don’t say it! you broke my heart I new it ever since the very first start I loved u, I did I loved you a lot but when you said I love u you teared out my heart for you said it with no meaning and no sighn of love you didn’t even look me straight in the eye so don’t say I love u when it’s all a lie you just broke my heart and I didn’t know why

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Answer #1

thnx!

Answer #2

I cried it is so true and I can relate to that. :)

Answer #3

aww thats soo deep, I really like it and no it doesnt seem made up I could almost feel your pain.actually you just made me all sad..jez whoever broke your heart should go lick a goats a** anyway I really like it.

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