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What do think of this poem thing I made
Ok I no this isnt very good because I s*ck at writing but what do you think…
The girl no one really knows…
No one knows who I really am.
Everyone sees me as a sweet responsible girl who loves horses.
But on the other side of "that" girl theres a dark side.
Nobody realizes,
But its there...
I do my best to hide it,
But theres times when it escapes...
On my dark side im filled with anger and hurt
No one repects me for who I really am
Im sick of being made fun of for beiong the horse gal that no one likes.
Maybe I should just let the dark side take over.
It might be better for everyone.
That way I might fit in,
But...
No one knows who I really am...Ok I think it s*cks but what do you think? I want you to be compleatly honest!!!
I love it! okay is that about u? must be but okay just do what makes you happy. if being nice/good makes you happy then do that. if being dark makes you happy then do that. or even if you like being in the middle.
I dont think its very good sorry
hey if thats about you I am right there with you. that was so deep. I looovvveeeddd it. you are so amazing. I hope that you write more.
I think it’s really good
its igghtt…lol sike nah it’s great
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