poem I made up tell me what you think

this is a poem I made up tell me what you think positive OR negative comments are accepted

love is a thing that takes over your body and mind its painful yet its impossible to leave behind because once your in love you feel lost inside and you cant run from it or hide is love really worth all this pain and trouble even though in the end the pain is more than double love is nothing but a maze filled with twists and turns but no matter how good it is eventually it burns so howcome you never get enough of all this this pain do you really want it or are you insane?

Answer #2

love isnt bad it just gets to your head

Answer #3

not all love is painful. but I think its a really great pom

Answer #4

sometimes, love can be soo deceiving-inequality of feelings between 2 people, that’s what I felt from your poem, cutie guy. it needs to be polished a bit, and you need to be more inspired and has to really feel the poem and it’s substance, by then, you’ll see..Ü

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