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Poem, what do you think?

(I wrote this in 15 minutes because I was bored in a class not the greatest thing ever I know, what do you think its about?)

seeing your face after three weeks being that close it makes me weak, we were made for eachother cant you see a perfect pair just you and me.

I did something the worst something anyone could do, I broke your heart again I cheated on you. a big mistake is what its called, the drinks kept coming the whole night I bawled. cried myself to sleep still do everynight, I miss you so much this just isnt right.

we were made for eachother cant you see a perfect pair no longer you and me.

2 souls shattered and torn apart, a love boat sinking broken hearts. they cant be mended, fixed whatever you call it, you and I we were a great hit. we were the perfect image of a pair, we gave all of our love for the two of us to share

we were made for eachother cant you see, two broken people; never again to be you and me.

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Answer #1

Thats really beautiful! Who is it for!? I think that its so sweet

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