What do yeh think about this poem I wrote...

Its a little bit like a fairy tale but no happily ever after…

She went out late at night to dance her blues away… She met this knight and they dance their night away…

She held him tight, never wanting to let go. She wish she could live this moment forever. He smiles at her and he took her breath away.

Soon, she felt something is wrong. He looked into her eyes and walked away. Leaving her in the middle of the dance with tears in eyes.

It was so perfect. Everything she ever wanted was him. Just when she thought she could have him forever… she lost him.

A close friend of hers, was not far from where she was. Looked at her, crying her pain away. She knelt beside her and held her tight. She knew her friend had fallen for the knight.

As she lay in her bed alone, thinking of what had happen that night. She smiled to herself as she think of that special moment they had. She will never forget his face but she knew she have to let it all go away.

Why does love have to cause so much pain?

Answer #1

Nice.

Well…they balance eachother out I guess. ^_^

Answer #2

very good!

Answer #3

This is beautiful, my friend.

Answer #4

That was simply AMAAAZING This deserves a 1000 Billion points cause it’s that good!!!

Answer #5

average hottie

Answer #6

thats such a beautiful poem, but thts one thing everyone who falls in love has to put up with love is pain and couses pain but thats the point in life its to learn that love isnt just game heck life isnt just a game becouse everyone who is in your life everyone you meet even just a meeting by chance or a hi or hello who ever you sed it too I in your life now everyone who is in your life is there for a reason the same as every heart that brakes it braakes for a reason but thats a lovly poem.

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