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What you guys think of "My Love" poem?

Its called “My Love”..but watever..I dont good I think…here it is.

~My love, I will treat you like a gentleman whenever you like. ~As a husband open the door for his lovely wife to dinner on a beauiful night.

~My love, I will always be honest to you. ~Like a captain promising an oath to his followed crew.

~My love, I want you to be a close friend to me. ~A friendship that have lasted long from the year B.C.

~My love, with you, I wanna spare my every holiday events. ~My upcoming memories of Christmas Day, Valentine Day, even Independence’s.

~My love, I wish to make all your dreams come true. ~Giving you hope and blesses, also from you to me too.

~My love, I wont ever betray to what over people lack. ~Becoming meanful and stab each other in the back.

~My love, I want you to be one of my guardian angel. ~Helping me get pass every difficult angle.

~My love, I want you to always be by my side that will never unbind. ~And always be together forever, that will last till the end of time.

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Answer #1

I love that poem it was so sweet. the only critisicm I have is in the thrd stanza make it years

Answer #2

It’s very repetitive, it becomes banal after awhile It doesn’t seem to have too much of a rhyme scheme. Nice simile though. Perhaps it would be better with more.

However, it comes from the heart and that’s what matters. I’m sure the person you give it to will enjoy it. Best of luck 1_~

Answer #3

aww that is a relii sweet poem and whoever the lucky person recvivein it is im sure they will love it xx

Answer #4

awww LOVE IT! I didnt understand the first stanza, but after that it was really cute

Answer #5

Awww its really Cute !<3

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