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How do my song lyrics sound?

do you think my songs any good? if u do or dont help me out please! thanks!

V1: You left me broken/ you left me hurt/ you left the pieces of my heart/ laying on my bedroom floor/ but if you think/ that i cry/ when im alone/ well baby your wrong/ cuz you can say all you want/ but/ im stronger/ than what you think i am/ so you can go and tell your friends/ how puthetic you think i am/ but i know im stronger/

Main: Im stronger than this/ and in a way/ you did me some good/ by leaving my heart out in the rain/ cuz now i learned to move on/ and pick myself back up/ and learn to smile longer/ so in a way/ you made me stronger/

V2: you go laugh and make fuof me/ but nobody really cares/ cuz im the better person/ by not etting you get to me/ so go ahead and think your all cool/ by breaking my heart away/ but in the end il be okay/ cuz

V3: so__/go ahead and just you listen because/ im gonna be just okay/ so breaking my heart has made stronger/ cuz look at me today/ im smiling an breaking/ away/ so in a way/ oh ohh in a way/ ya in a way…/ you made me stronger

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Answer #1

I think its cute. You should definatly keep writing doll, you seem to have a knack for it.

Answer #2

I really like it, i like the concept of it and how youre pushing through a breakup. songs with a meaning like yours, that a lot of people can relate to are awesome because its honest. it really lets ppl in on your emotions!! great job, keep it up. (:

Answer #3

Thanks!!

Answer #4

Thanks!!

Answer #5

this is realy good:) no joke great job. btw i was looking for a Lyric writter if your interested im a song writter not good with lyrics my self. :P but if you feel like helping me out that would be cool. you would get all the credit for the lyrics.

Answer #6

sure!

Answer #7

ok:) im working on a song right now when i finish it up ill send you a copy and you can see wat you do:o

Answer #8

alright