Lyrics:are they good or need some fixing

(Verse 1) you were just another guy, that I had a crush on. I thought it blow over, but I fell in love I had my friends and you had yours, they told me be strong but they didn’t know

chorus: it was you that I’d fallen for it was you that made me want to be strong but you made me weak and it was you who gave me these feelings to love… it was all you

(Verse 2) when a couple of months passed, and I’d fallen harder, I felt my heart pulling, pulling me towards you I couldn’t believe she lked you to, so I hid my feelings like I didn’t care, but it seemed like you noticed…

chorus: it was you that I’d fallen for it was you that made me want to be strong but you made me weak and it was you who gave me these feelings to love… it was all you

(Bridge) she was a friend to you, and a friend to me too, and you choose her, not me or the other girl… it was our friend you choose

(chorus) my friends didn’t know it was you that we all fell for but your now hers, one of the girls I called a friend but she didn’t know… it was you that gave me these feelings to love…

it was you…oh… all you

so tell me if there good enough to record and out on a demo tape and there are more lyrics I’d like help with like: Life goes on leave me alone be with you forever party time all on your own crazy about you our dreams sickness still in love move over tell me which song would sound more interesting to edit and I’ll post the lyrics thnx you guys :)