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How does my new song sound?

I’ll never give up on you no matter what you do no matter what you say I’m in Peices anyways feeling the warmth of His blood gave it all for the thing called love he has risen again again

chorus- father my creator where am I to go where am I to go what do you have in store for me why do you use me?

V2- broken and mingled in ways even when I sing Your praise why don’t you stop the pain the ones who hated You You always loved them to tell me what I should do dooo

chorus- Father my Creator where am I to go where am I to go what do you have in store for me why do you use me I’m screaming out this prayer because no1 else seems to care I can feel your Spirit filling the gap in me

bridge- even when this body is burnin in the flames I pray I’ll be with you and singin with the saints my future I give to You my soul is baptized in you and I can’t away I know you’ll see this through

end on 2nd chorus

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Answer #1

Thanks btw the song is called mingled haha

Answer #2

The chorus sounds like im saying a prayer to God ! but yeah it sounds good as long as you have A good Music to go with it

Answer #3

really nice solid song(: my favorite line was:

broken and mingled in ways even when I sing Your praise

keep it up :D

Answer #4

OO!!! I love the song! shoot, it’s amazing, seriously.. I love how it has to do with God, and the meaning behind it an everything, nice job (:

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