Do you like this song I wrote???(just lyrics)

when we were little kids we would play together just you and me all your friends used to think you were crazy by the time we were in high school our favorite color was blue listened to the same old songs we walked down the halls together we had been friends forever everyone knew it was true I never went anywhere without you and guess what? my favorite color is still blue the sadest thing happened high school ended and you just left I was all alone I couldn’t do it on my own so I guess I found someone new Now your back here again you still think we are more than friends I’m sorry now I don’t know how but I have different feelings now and we walked down the halls together we had been friends forever and everyone knew it was true our first kiss was magic and I knew we had it but high schools over now. I have to forget you… when we were little kids we would play together just you and me all your friends used to think you were crazy by the time we were in high school our favorite color was blue listened to the same old songs and my favorite color is still blue listen to the same old songs the only difference is I’m not with you. and we walked down the halls together we had been friends forever and everyone knew it was true I promised you then and there I would never forget you oh baby and I’m so sorry I just have to break that promise now I just have to.

leave answers please!!!

Answer #1

nice job sounds like a type of song I would rite because I always rite love songs a sad songs and other crap like that lolz… but anyways awesome song

Answer #2

yeah I like it it depends on the beat you use because I could totally remix this.

Answer #3

sounds like a country song to me! now to tell you if you can be famous someday then I would need a lot more info than just that song! like do you intend on singing the songs your self? if so then do you have a good enough voice?? Or if you plan on just writting songs and music can you write about other things?

It all comes down to you being good at what you do and having the determination and drive to make your dreams come true, anythings possible! Keep writing and practising!! and good luck

Answer #4

I like the lyrics to the son, think your talented, plus it sounds like your gonna give it to someone who you used to like and they still like you, but your kinda of telling them you’ve found someone new in your life but I still like this, I hope you do another one it sounds really good

Answer #5

sweet song.I LOVE it.Ipersonally am not a gr8 writr.I wrote like 1 song.som1 really should chck it out.I thnk its ok,but urs is WAY bttr!

Answer #6

It’s amazing,you may want to separate the verses from the chorus’s next time but other than that,awesome!

Answer #7

Sounds like it would fit the soundtrack of the movie Twilight ! I like it !

Answer #8

This sounds like a cute song.(: I like it a lot…but sounds like a song made for a girl you were in love with..

Answer #9

I like it personally but please please tell me if you like it, and if you think that it can maybe get famous?

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