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Lyrics/song I write, what do you think??

Hold your head up to the sky And hope on thoughts who those that die I from now will promise you I will not waste my time For everyone’s telling me to stay strong I have always hidden my tears Although they just re-appear

As the time fly’s Still crying my goodbyes I’m growing up, getting older My life without you is dripping colder

You’re my guardian angel You’re my memories in frames You’re the face I see as I look above You’re the one I miss and love

I wont forget ever holding your hand But i’ll give up future that we never planned Although i’ll wait for each morning to arrive Pretending that you did survive How I wish that to come true Though I understand i’ll never get to see you

What happened together and always Never shall death do us apart Because i’ll never stop loving you With my pulsating heart

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Answer #1

its pretty good and has a strong meaning like was sed ^ but in sum parts it needs a lil work overall especially if its your first good job

Answer #2

Good work. It’s got more meaning than people who just randomly talk about death and hope for the best.

If it’s your first lyric, it’s amazin. Even if u’d been duin it for a few years it would be extremely good.

Answer #3

Awesome

Answer #4

You use way too many words to get your point across so it gets a little confusing.

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