What do you think of my writing?

ok tell me what you think..

what can I say my worlds in black and gray everyday and every night my worlds in black and white until you came along and showed how to get along with all my worries and all my frights and now my worlds in all diffrent colors and now all I see All I see is you this is my life ths is my song you came in and showed me that I had a voice that I didnt know and you are the reason that I know glow

thats all so far lolz not that great but what do you think??

Answer #1

I love it!

Answer #2

that’s wicked awsome!! it sounds so cool keep it up

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