What do you think of this poem I wrote?

it wasnt really a poem it has meaning…but it was more of a stroy like you telling someone how you fell dont get me wrong it was good..but you need more practice if you want 2 be a poet… keep writing!

that poem was great to me and im nearly 14 and I dont need it to rhyme I still spoke to me in a very deep way and the words that I got is im hurting but it is ok to hurt I promise u I’ve been there and I honestly hope u get through love, me

I think what your trying to express is very difficult to do. its more like a spoken song than a poem though. its very true. good luck with future works. try to work in a rhythm and some rhyme next time. Sincerely, a poet.

I think it’s more prose than poem. It’s pretty much chock full of cliches and I don’t think you said anything in that poem I haven’t heard 1,000 times over from other outlets.

Poems are written in poem form and have some sort of flow. There was no flow with that, it was prose. If you want to be a poet, it is imperative that you learn the difference between prose and poetry.

That’s my opinion about it. Try to say something that hasn’t been said before, word things with color and creativity. Weave your words carefully. Then you will improve. Keep writing!

I wrote this the other day after I was talking to my cousin, me an her r both in the same hole. We still both love our ex’s soo much but we want them to be happy an as I was thinking, if we let them go and learn to live with everything that has taken place we will be able to move on with our own lives an be able to let someone else into it.. Idk if u understand what im trying to say then great lol..

thanks for listening..

love always megan

I like it. I’m sure y’all will be able to move on & let someone else in. it may hurt for a while but hey, that’s life. It’ll pass slowly. Just try not to let thing’s get to you as much. Good Luck to you both. <3

That’s a deep peom. that’s so true