Opinions on my other poem?

the tables have turned. the tides pull me in. my life has been burned. your out of my skin.

The places I go. the pepole I see. its never 2 late. only 2 escape.

will we float away? will we die alone? will we fall asleep? will you stay with me?

Answer #1

lol

Answer #2

amazing poem

Answer #3

that was really good1 you shud write more!

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