give your opinion on this poem

please give your opinion on this. its called blindness.

you are everything to me I hold you close to my heart our lives entertwined

your dreams are mine I want to give it up for you to reach your goal

but your misguided you think my vision of you is wrong that your nobody in this cruel world

you are uncertian you want your dream but dont have the will to do it

you are afraid that if you go for it your dream will be distroyed

I try to tell you different that your dream is worth something that you are important to this world

you think how can that be true that im just saying things that im lying

but I believe in you to have the strength that you will trust your heart

you keep hiding in the dark wishing it will all go away that you can be yourself

but you are blind you can live that life letting go of your hurtful past

you can be your own judge living your life living your dream

you must trust your heart that it will guide you through the turmoil

you can do it write your own destiny live your own dreams

you are still uncertian you have never seen such belief you are thinking is he truthful

ill help you along your dream entertwined with mine you will fufuill it

trust your heart it will guide you live your dreams

Answer #1

thnks

Answer #2

it’s good.:)

Answer #3

I love it…its amazing and I love the title how it explains the poem nice work…way 2 go

Answer #4

Love it=] its good.

Answer #5

jeje I like it :D nice job

Answer #6

its deep. I like it

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