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give your opinion on this poem
please give your opinion on this. its called blindness.
you are everything to me I hold you close to my heart our lives entertwined
your dreams are mine I want to give it up for you to reach your goal
but your misguided you think my vision of you is wrong that your nobody in this cruel world
you are uncertian you want your dream but dont have the will to do it
you are afraid that if you go for it your dream will be distroyed
I try to tell you different that your dream is worth something that you are important to this world
you think how can that be true that im just saying things that im lying
but I believe in you to have the strength that you will trust your heart
you keep hiding in the dark wishing it will all go away that you can be yourself
but you are blind you can live that life letting go of your hurtful past
you can be your own judge living your life living your dream
you must trust your heart that it will guide you through the turmoil
you can do it write your own destiny live your own dreams
you are still uncertian you have never seen such belief you are thinking is he truthful
ill help you along your dream entertwined with mine you will fufuill it
trust your heart it will guide you live your dreams
thnks
it’s good.:)
I love it…its amazing and I love the title how it explains the poem nice work…way 2 go
Love it=] its good.
jeje I like it :D nice job
its deep. I like it
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