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love poem (want your real opinion)

my girlfriend is a bit down at the moment so I thought I would write her a love poem and it might not be the best but do you think it would cheer her up. girls, would you be cheered up if you recieved this.

A pedal to a rose And everyone knows It’s more that just love Soring around like a white turtle dove

Tears for joy and tears for pain It’s like standing out in the hot summer rain It’s more than the sound of your sweet gentle name This is a lot more than just a silly little game

Words can’t sum up the way that I feel But I’ll definetly say These feelings are real And as Sent from above Im here to give you my undying love

So in closing my dear I pray I’ve made it rather clear You mean everything to me My sweet heart can’t you see I can’t get enough of your endless touch Oh my sweet baby, I love you so much!

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Answer #1

Omg its great! this poem would cheer up any girl well actually… could win any girls heart D= :P lol

Answer #2

yup its going to win her heart!!!

Answer #3

awww! that’s the sweetest thing I’ve ever heard. id love if my boyfriend said something like this lol. x

Answer #4

This is cute. I like this poem, it would make me happy lol.

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