Some bits and pieces for a poem, opinions?

the tables have turned. the tides pull me in. my life has been burned. your out of my skin. The places I go. the pepole I se...

my girlfriend is a bit down at the moment so I thought I would write her a love poem and it might not be the best but do you ...

I am here and waiting for you. My eyes are swollen and searching for you. I spot you and our lips meet. Hands in the air in h...

Hi. I wrote this poem and I have no idea what to think of it. I thought of trashing it 'cause it just seems too dark for my t...

I need opinions on this poem cause I wrote it and I'm handing it in in a way so I need opinions... Shut-eye Another stroke...

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

My daily poem piece:maybe it will be put together someday I have many masks I dont know whitch one to wear Im tired of spend...

please give your opinion on this. its called blindness. you are everything to me I hold you close to my heart our lives ente...

I am writting a summer poem and I need help on what exactly to write can you help?

When the sun sets, the Earth does weep for want of beauty. The rain falls and the tears flow, The hungry ground wails in angu...